HOW TO WRITE A LITERARY ANALYSIS ESSAY 


The purpose of a literary analysis essay is to carefully examine and sometimes evaluate a work of 
literature or an aspect of a work of literature. As with any analysis, this requires you to break the 
subject down into its component parts. Examining the different elements of a piece of literature is 
not an end in itself but rather a process to help you better appreciate and understand the work of 
literature as a whole. For instance, an analysis of a poem might deal with the different types of 
images in a poem or with the relationship between the form and content of the work. If you were to 
analyze (discuss and explain) a play, you might analyze the relationship between a subplot and the 
main plot, or you might analyze the character flaw of the tragic hero by tracing how it is revealed 
through the acts of the play. Analyzing a short story might include identifying a particular theme 
(like the difficulty of making the transition from adolescence to adulthood) and showing how the 
writer suggests that theme through the point of view from which the story is told; or you might also 
explain how the main characters attitude toward women is revealed through his dialogue and/or 
actions. 

REMEMBER: Writing is the sharpened, focused expression of thought and study. As you develop 
your writing skills, you will also improve your perceptions and increase your critical abilities. 
Writing ultimately boils down to the development of an idea. Your objective in writing a literary 
analysis essay is to convince the person reading your essay that you have supported the idea you 
are developing. Unlike ordinary conversation and classroom discussion, writing must stick 
with great determination to the specific point of development. This kind of writing demands 
tight organization and control. Therefore, your essay must have a central idea (thesis), it must 
have several paragraphs that grow systematically out of the central idea, and everything in it 
must be directly related to the central idea and must contribute to the readers 
understanding of that central idea. These three principles are listed again below: 

1. 
Your essay must cover the topic you are writing about. 
2. 
Your essay must have a central idea (stated in your thesis) that 
governs its development. 
3. 
Your essay must be organized so that every part contributes 
something to the readers understanding of the central idea. 
THE ELEMENTS OF A GOOD ESSAY 

The Thesis Statement 

The thesis statement tells your reader what to expect: it is a restricted, precisely worded 
declarative sentence that states the purpose of your essay -- the point you are trying to make. 
Without a carefully conceived thesis, an essay has no chance of success. The following are 
thesis statements which would work for a 500-750 word literary analysis essay: 

Gwendolyn Brookss 1960 poem The Ballad of Rudolph Reed demonstrates how 
the poet uses the conventional poetic form of the ballad to treat the unconventional 
poetic subject of racial intolerance. 

The fate of the main characters in Antigone illustrates the danger of excessive pride. 

The imagery in Dylan Thomass poem Fern Hill reveals the ambiguity of our 
relationship with nature. 

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PLEASE NOTE: THE BEST PLACE TO PUT YOUR THESIS STATEMENT IS AT THE END OF 
YOUR INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH. 

The Introduction 

The introduction to your literary analysis essay should try to arouse interest in your reader. To 
bring immediate focus to your subject, you may want to use a quotation, a provocative question, a 
personal anecdote, a startling statement, or a combination of these. You may also want to include 
background information relevant to your thesis and necessary for the reader to understand the 
position you are taking. 
In addition, you need to include the title of the work of literature and name of the author. 
The following are satisfactory introductory paragraphs which include appropriate thesis statements: 

A. 
What would you expect to be the personality of a man who has his wife sent away to 
a convent (or perhaps has had her murdered) because she took too much pleasure in the 
sunset and in a compliment paid to her by another man? It is just such a man -- a 
Renaissance duke -- that Robert Browning portrays in his poem My Last Duchess. 
Through what he says about himself, through his actions, and through his interpretation of 
earlier incidents, the Duke reveals the arrogance, jealousy, and materialism that are his 
most conspicuous traits. 
B. 
The first paragraph of Alberto Alvaro Rioss short story The Secret Lion presents a 
twelve-year-old boys view of growing up -- everything changes. As the narrator tells us, 
when the magician pulls a tablecloth out from under a pile of dishes, children are amazed at 
the stay-the-same part, while adults focus only on the tablecloth itself (42). Adults have 
the benefit of experience and know the trick will work as long as the technique is correct. 
When we grow up we gain this experience and knowledge, but we lose our innocence and 
sense of wonder. In other words, the price we pay for growing up is a permanent sense of 
loss. This tradeoff is central to The Secret Lion. The key symbols in the story reinforce its 
main theme: change is inevitable and always accompanied by a sense of loss. 
C. 
The setting of John Updikes story A & P is crucial to our understanding of Sammys 
decision to quit his job. Even though Sammy knows that his quitting will make life more 
difficult for him, he instinctively insists upon rejecting what the A & P represents in the story. 
When he rings up a No Sale and saunter[s] out of the store, Sammy leaves behind not 
only a job but the rigid state of mind associated with the A & P. Although Sammy is the 
central character in the story and we learn much about him, Updike seems to invest as 
much effort in describing the setting as he does Sammy. The title, after all, is not Youthful 
Rebellion or Sammy Quits but A & P. In fact, the setting is the antagonist of the story 
and plays a role that is as important as Sammys. 
The Body of the Essay and the Importance of Topic Sentences 

The term regularly used for the development of the central idea of a literary analysis essay is the 
body. In this section you present the paragraphs (at least 3 paragraphs for a 500-750 word 
essay) that support your thesis statement. Good literary analysis essays contain an explanation of 
your ideas and evidence from the text (short story, poem, play) that supports those ideas. Textual 
evidence consists of summary, paraphrase, specific details, and direct quotations. 

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Each of the paragraphs of your essay should contain a topic sentence (usually the first sentence 
of the paragraph) which states one of the topics associated with your thesis, combined with some 
assertion about how the topic will support the central idea. The purpose of the topic sentence is 
twofold: 

1. To tie the details of the paragraph to your thesis statement. 
2. To tie the details of the paragraph together. 
The substance of each of your developmental paragraphs (the body of your essay) will be the 
explanations, summaries, paraphrases, specific details, and direct quotations you need to support 
and develop the more general statement you have made in your topic sentence. The following is 
the first developmental paragraph after one of the introductory paragraphs (C) above: 

TOPIC SENTENCE 
Sammy's descriptions of the A & P present a 
setting that is ugly, monotonous, and rigidly 
regulated. We can identify with the uniformity 
Sammy describes because we have all been in 
chain stores. The fluorescent light is as blandly 


EXPLANATIONS AND 
cool as the "checkerboard green-and-cream 

TEXTUAL EVIDENCE 
rubber tile floor" (486). The "usual traffic in the 
store moves in one direction (except for the 
swim suited girls, who move against it), and 
everything is neatly organized and categorized 
in tidy aisles. The dehumanizing routine of this 
environment is suggested by Sammy's offhand 
references to the typical shoppers as "sheep," 
"house slaves," and "pigs." These regular 
customers seem to walk through the store in a 
stupor; as Sammy tells us, not even dynamite 
could move them out of their routine (485). 


This paragraph is a strong one because it is developed through the use of quotations, summary, 
details, and explanation to support the topic sentence. Notice how it relates back to the thesis 
statement. 

The Conclusion 

Your literary analysis essay should have a concluding paragraph that gives your essay a sense of 
completeness and lets your readers know that they have come to the end of your paper. Your 
concluding paragraph might restate the thesis in different words, summarize the main points you 
have made, or make a relevant comment about the literary work you are analyzing, but from a 
different perspective. Do not introduce a new topic in your conclusion. Below is the 
concluding paragraph from the essay already quoted above (A) about Browning's poem "My Last 
Duchess": 

If the Duke has any redeeming qualities, they fail to appear in the poem. Browning's 
emphasis on the Duke's traits of arrogance, jealousy, and materialism make it apparent that 
anyone who might have known the Duke personally would have based his opinion of him on 
these three personality "flaws." Ultimately, our opinion of the Duke is not a favorable one, 
and it is clear that Browning meant us to feel this way. 

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The Title of Your Essay 

It is essential that you give your essay a title which is descriptive of the approach you are taking in 
your paper. Just as you did in your introductory paragraph, try to get the reader's attention. Using 
only the title of the literary work you are examining is unsatisfactory. The titles that follow are 
appropriate for the papers (A, B, C) discussed above: 

Robert Browning's Duke: So What's to Like? 
The A & P as a State of Mind 
"The Secret Lion": It's Hard to Grow Up 

Audience 

Consider the reader for whom you are writing your essay. Imagine you are writing for other 
students in your class who have about as much education as you do. They have read the 
assigned work just as you have, but perhaps they have not thought about it in exactly the same 
way as you. In other words, it is not necessary to "retell" the work of literature in any way. 
Rather it is your role to be the explainer or interpreter of the work -- to tell what certain elements of 
the work mean in relation to your central idea (thesis). When you make references to the text of 
the short story, poem, or play, you are doing so in order to remind your audience of something they 
already know. The principle emphasis of your essay is to draw conclusions and develop 
arguments. 

USING TEXTUAL EVIDENCE 

The skillful use of textual evidence --summary, paraphrase, specific detail, and direct 
quotations -- can illustrate and support the ideas you are developing in your essay. However, 
textual evidence should be used judiciously and only when it directly relates to your topic. The 
correct and effective use of textual evidence is vital to the successful literary analysis essay. 

Summary 

If a key event or series of events in the literary work support a point you are trying to make, you 
may want to include a brief summary, making sure that you show the relevance of the event or 
events by explicitly connecting your summary to your point. Below is an effective summary (with 
its relevance clearly pointed out) from the essay already quoted above on "The Secret Lion" (B): 

The boys find the grinding ball, but later attempt to bury it (SUMMARY). Burying it is 
their futile attempt to make time stand still and to preserve perfection 
(RELEVANCE). 

Paraphrase 

You can make use of paraphrase when you need the details of the original, but not necessarily the 
words of the original: paraphrase to put someone else's words into your own words. Below is an 

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example (also from the paper on "The Secret Lion") of how to "translate" original material into part 
of your own paper: 

Original: 
"I was twelve and in junior high school and something happened that we didn't 
have a name for, but it was nonetheless like a lion, and roaring, roaring that 
way the biggest things do." 

Paraphrase: Early in the story, the narrator tells us that when he turned twelve and started 
junior high school, life changed in a significant way that he and his friends 
couldn't quite find a name for. 

Specific Detail 

Various types of details from the text lend concrete support to the development of the central idea 
of your literary analysis essay. These details add credibility to the point you are developing. 
Below is a list of some of the details which could have been used in the developmental paragraph 
from the paper on John Updike's short story "A & P" (see the paragraph again for which details 
were used and how they were used).

 "usual traffic" 
"fluorescent lights" 
"checkerboard green-and-cream rubber-tile floor" 
"electric eye" 
shoppers like "sheep," "houseslaves," and "pigs" 
neatly stacked food 
dynamite 


Using Direct Quotations 

Quotations can illuminate and support the ideas you are trying to develop. A judicious use of 
quoted material will make your points clearer and more convincing. As with all the textual 
evidence you use, make sure you explain how the evidence is relevant -- let the reader know 
what you make of the quotations you cite. Below are guidelines and examples that should help 
you use quotations effectively: 

1. 
Brief quotations (four lines or fewer of prose and three lines or fewer of poetry) should be 
carefully introduced and integrated into the text of your paper. Put quotation marks around 
all briefly quoted material. 
Prose example: 

As the "manager" of the A & P, Lengel is both the guardian and enforcer of "policy." When 
he gives the girls "that sad Sunday-school-superintendent stare," we know we are in the 
presence of the A & P's version of a dreary bureaucrat who "doesn't miss much" (487). 

Make sure you give page numbers when necessary. Notice that in this example the 
page numbers are in parenthesis after the quotation marks but before the period. 

Poetry example: 

From the beginning, the Duke in Browning's poem gives the reader a sense of how 
possessive he really is: "That's my last Duchess on the wall, / Looking as if she were alive" 

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(1-2). We can't help notice how, even though the Duke is talking about her portrait, his main 
concern is that she belongs to him. Notice that line # 1 is separated from line # 2 by a 
slash. Make sure you give the line numbers when necessary. 

2. 
Lengthy quotations should be separated from the text of your paper. More than four lines 
of prose should be double spaced and indented ten spaces from the left margin, with the 
right margin the same as the rest of your paper. More than three lines of poetry should be 
double spaced and centered on the page. Note: do not use quotation marks to set off 
these longer passages because the indentation itself indicates that the material is 
quoted. 
Prose example: 

The first paragraph of "The Secret Lion" introduces the narrator as someone who has just 
entered adolescence and isn't quite sure what to make of it: 

I was twelve and in junior high school and something happened that we didn't have a 
name for, but it was there nonetheless like a lion, and roaring, roaring that way the 
biggest things do. Everything changed. Just that. Like the rug, the one that gets 
pulled -- or better, like the tablecloth those magicians pull where the stuff on the table 
stays the same but the gasp! from the audience makes the staying-the-same part not 
matter. Like that. (41-42) Make sure you give page numbers when necessary. 
Notice in this example that the page numbers are in parenthesis after the 
period of the last sentence. 

Poetry example: 

The Duke seems to object to the fact that his "last Duchess" is not discriminating enough 
about bestowing her affection. In the following lines from the middle of the poem, the Duke 
lists examples of this "fault": 

Sir, 'twas all one! My favor at her breast, 
The drooping of the daylight in the west, 
The bough of cherries some officious fool 
Broke in the orchard for her, the white mule 
She rode with round the terrace -- all and each 
Would draw from her alike the approving speech. (25-30) 


Make sure you give line numbers when necessary. 

3. 
If any words are added to a quotation in order to explain who or what the quotation refers to, 
you must use brackets to distinguish your addition from the original source. 
Example: 

The literary critic John Strauss asserts that "he [Young Goodman Brown] is portrayed as 
self-righteous and disillusioned." Brackets are used here because there is no way of 
knowing who "he" is unless you add that information. 

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Brackets are also used to change the grammatical structure of a quotation so that it fits into 
your sentence. 

Example: 

Strauss also argues that Hawthorne "present[s] Young Goodman Brown in an ambivalent 
light." Brackets are used here to add the "s" to the verb "present" because otherwise 
the sentence would not be grammatically correct. 

4. 
You must use ellipsis if you omit any words from the original source you are quoting. 
Ellipsis can be used at the beginning, in the middle, or at the end of the quotation, 
depending on where the missing words were originally. Ellipsis is formed by either three 
or four periods with a space between each period. 
Original: "Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." 

Example (omission from beginning): 

This behavior ". . . makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise." Ellipsis formed by three 
dots after the quotation marks. 

Example (omission from middle): 

This maxim claims that "Early to bed . . . makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise." Ellipsis 
formed by three dots used in place of the words "and early to rise." 

Example (omission from end): 

He said, "Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy . . . ." Ellipsis is formed by 
four dots before the quotation marks -- the fourth dot is really a period which ends 
the sentence. 

5. 
Use a single line of spaced periods to indicate the omission of an entire line of poetry. 
Example: 

The Duke seems to object to the fact that his "last Duchess" is not discriminating enough 

about bestowing her affection: 
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 
The drooping of the daylight in the West, 
The bough of cherries some officious fool 
Broke in the orchard for her, while the white mule 
She rode around the terrace -- like and each 
Would draw from her alike the approving speech. (26-30) 


Punctuating Direct Quotations 

You will be able to punctuate quoted materials accurately if you observe the following conventions 

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used in writing about literature: 

1. 
When the quoted material is part of your own sentence, place periods and commas inside 
the quotation marks. 
Example: 

The narrator of "The Secret Lion" says that the change was "like a lion." The period is 

inside the quotation marks. 

2. 
When the quoted material is part of your own sentence, but you need to include a 
parenthetical reference to page or line numbers, place the periods and commas after the 
reference. 
Example: 

The narrator of "The Secret Lion" says that the change was "like a lion" (41). The 
period is outside the quotation marks, after the parenthetical reference. 

3. 
When the quoted material is part of your own sentence, punctuation marks other than 
periods and commas, such as question marks, are placed outside the quotation marks, 
unless they are part of the quoted material. 
Example (not part of original): 

Why does the narrator of "The Secret Lion" say that the change was "like a lion"? The 
question mark is placed after the quotation marks because it does not appear in the 
original -- it ends a question being asked about the story. 

Example (part of original): 

The Duke shows his indignation that the Duchess could like everyone and everything when 
he says, "Sir, 'twas all one!" The exclamation point is placed inside the quotation 
marks because it appears in the original. 

4. 
When the original material you are quoting already has quotations marks (for instance, 
dialog from a short story), you must use single quotation marks within the double quotation 
marks. 
Example: 

Lengel tries to stop Sammy from quitting by saying, " 'Sammy, you don't want to do this to 
your Mom and Dad'. " 

THREE CONVENTIONS TO REMEMBER WHEN WRITING A LITERARY ANALYSIS ESSAY 

1. 
You must give a clear, full reference to the work and author you are writing about 
somewhere in your introductory paragraph (see the example introductory paragraphs A, 
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B, and C above). 

2. 
Use the correct format for referring to the work you are discussing. The titles of short 
stories, poems, and essays should be placed in quotation marks; the titles of novels, plays, 
films, and TV shows should be either underlined or italicized: 
"My Last Duchess" (poem) Antigone (play) 
"The Secret Lion" (short story) Forest Gump (movie) 
Pride and Prejudice (novel) Roseanne (TV show) 


3. 
Use the present tense when you are discussing and writing about literature -- literary works 
are considered to exist in the present (see all the example paragraphs throughout). 
CHECKLIST

 1. 
Is the topic you have chosen to write about manageable for the length of the paper you are 
writing? 
Is it too narrow or too broad? 
2. 
Is your title engaging? Does it suggest the approach you are taking in your paper? 
3. 
Does your first paragraph introduce your topic, name the writer and the work, and end with 
your thesis statement? Will it get the reader's attention? 
4. 
Is your thesis clear? Does it state the central idea of your paper? 
5. 
Is your paper organized in a way that your reader will be able to follow? 
6. 
Are your developmental paragraphs unified (everything in the paragraph relates to the topic 
of the paragraph) and coherent (everything in the paragraph is arranged in a logical order)? 
7. 
Have you used transitional words where necessary within each paragraph? Are there 
transitions linking all the paragraphs of your essay? 
8. 
Does your concluding paragraph provide a sense of closure? 
9. 
Have you used technical terms correctly? 
10. 
Have you used brief summary, paraphrase, specific details, and direct quotations? Have 
you explained why you are using them and how they support your central idea? 
11. 
If you have used information from sources outside the actual work of literature (for example, 
books of criticism), have you documented this information properly? To provide 
documentation for literary papers, you need to use MLA documentation style, which can 
found in most English handbooks and in books on how to write research papers. 
12. 
Have you proofread your final draft? 
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